Tuesday 15 December 2020

Teeth

 

Today I was reading a story about teeth.
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2 comments:

  1. Zana Yates-Walker15 December 2020 at 11:14

    Kia Ora Luke,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey, it is awesome to see your first post of the summer and I look forward to seeing more as you continue blogging! I thought this activity was really exciting as I love comics and I think writing comics is really fun. It is great that you included a video but I think you could have just posted your comic. I think your comic was quite funny but it would have been even better if you had added some more information, like what is the man thinking and saying, is he having a conversation about the man lying or is he just having a laugh. What do you think you could do to step up your post?

    Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

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  2. Amie @ Manaiakalani16 December 2020 at 12:38

    Kia ora Luke,
    I'm a Tairāwhiti facilitator just like Mrs Torrie, who comes into your school to work with some of the teachers. I'm so happy to see you joining in on the Summer Learning Journey, especially as you've already created more than 100 amazing blog posts across this year! I wonder how many more you'll post with the Summer Learning journey. It looks like you've put a lot of work into your slides and it would be amazing to be able to really see what you've done. If you post your comic for us, we'll be able to read it here, which would be so fun! Do you remember how to use File > Publish to the Web, to help you to embed your digital learning object in your blog post? I look forward to reading more in your next post about the activity you've completed and what learning you got from the process.
    Keep up the great blogging,
    Mrs Williams
    Manaiakalani Outreach Programme Leader in Tairāwhiti Gisborne

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