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My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I thought your song was awesome and I loved that you kept the superhero theme with the lyrics and the background. I especially liked the lyric that a hero lays in you, very inspirational. I can imagine this song being the opening theme to a superhero movie!
I would like to know where you got the inspiration for your lyrics and what they mean to you.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Kia ora Luke, I can see that you have presented these lyrics in a colourful way. I think the activity asked for you to create lyrics of your own. Remember to read the instructions fully so you score points for creating your own stuff. from Mrs Torrie
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Kia Ora Luke,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I thought your song was awesome and I loved that you kept the superhero theme with the lyrics and the background. I especially liked the lyric that a hero lays in you, very inspirational. I can imagine this song being the opening theme to a superhero movie!
I would like to know where you got the inspiration for your lyrics and what they mean to you.
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Kia ora Luke,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have presented these lyrics in a colourful way.
I think the activity asked for you to create lyrics of your own. Remember to read the instructions fully so you score points for creating your own stuff.
from Mrs Torrie