Thursday, 3 September 2020

Gods Creations

 we were learning to make a map of the school. 

I enjoyed making the map.

I found the writing tricky 

2 comments:

  1. Dear luke

    I like how you said what you were learning

    I think that you did awesome!

    Maybe next time you could say more about what you were doing

    Ma te wa
    charlotte

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  2. Dear Luke

    I like how you Made that map i thought helping me out was fantastic although i started again great map.


    Maybe next time you could
    Maybe extend you're writing and explain what you used to make those shapes and what you made them on, we were talking about the environmant in class and the teachers wanted to see the gardens but i cant seem to find much where you put the gradens and the compost the bug house on the juniors feild i think you could work on it more

    kind regaurds
    Mikaela.

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